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Photo Critique 3: “Untitled,” by Adriana O.

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I love critiquing photos. It’s the best way to learn and get new ideas for photo shoots. Today, we’re going to critique an image made by Adriana, a friend of mine in Venezuela.

"Untitled," By Adriana O.

"Untitled," By Adriana O.

General Overview:
Adriana, you really have a gift for composition. If you staged this shot, then you did an outstanding job making it look “real.” If you just saw it and decided to make a photo, then you have a great eye for finding interesting subjects in an otherwise normal setting.
This is a nice image because it’s not forced. You’re using a simple theme and simple techniques to make a visually-compelling image. I especially like your use of depth-of-field. The image falls out of focus at just the right place.
Great job.

Improvements
There are only two improvements I can see that you need to make. First, a little front lighting on the stack of puzzle pieces would have made the image look better because it’s just a little underexposed. Second, the light coming through in the upper right corner is distracting from the scene. I would definitely edit that out and perhaps make the whole background – from the end of the table on – black. By doing that, I think you would have made a perfect shot.
Finally, there are some hotspots on the puzzle pieces that need to be toned down. A little selective dodging would help there.

Great job overall. Your portfolio has some great images on it too.

Thanks for the submission, good luck and keep shooting!

If you would like to submit a photo for critique, e-mail us at submissions@brickhousephotoschool.com.

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Written by jeremyparce

February 20, 2009 at 1:00 am

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