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Photo Critique 8: ‘Texture 1,’ by Andres L.

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I love critiquing photos. It’s the best way to learn and get new ideas for photo shoots. Today, we’re going to critique an image made by Andres, my friend in Miami, Florida.

'Texture 1,' by Andres of Miami.

'Texture 1,' by Andres of Miami.

General Overview:
Andy, you have a great eye for finding beauty in the ordinary. You have a great ability to present ordinary objects in a new light. That’s a talent that will help you in photography or any other artistic endeavors you choose to pursue. You also have an incredible amount of patience working in post production. This is an important aspect to digital photography and you’re learning post-production techniques quite well.

Like most images submitted for critique, I like the concept of this image because of its simplicity. You present the viewer with an attractive, pleasing look at an otherwise normal scene. You give the viewer plenty of room to roam around the scene, yet stay focused on the message you’re trying to convey. As a viewer, I feel “at home” and comfortable in your scene and want to explore it more. I want to walk down the road and see where it leads. You did a great job of convincing your viewer to look at the image and wonder “where does that go?”

Good job.

Improvements
There are just a few improvements I want to suggest. First, the object (it looks like a box) about mid-way down the road needs to be removed. You could have either moved it prior to shooting or walked past it and shot further down the path. In post production, you could easily edit the box out. Either way, it’s a little distracting to the viewer.

Secondly, I think a little more detail in the sky would have helped separate it some from the ground.

Finally, I think a little more vignetting on the top and bottom would have achieved a better look. This is a matter of opinion, though, so it’s really up to you to decide.

I would also recommend playing around with the ISO sensitivity. Perhaps a grainy look would help make the image “pop” a little more.

A quick edit removes the box and the distraction. (Photo Credit: Andres L. with edit by Jeremy Schneider)

A quick edit removes the box and the distraction. (Photo Credit: Andres L. with edit by Jeremy Schneider)

Andy, you always do a great job. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the submission, good luck and keep shooting!

If you would like to submit a photo for critique, e-mail us at submissions@brickhousephotoschool.com.

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Written by jeremyparce

March 9, 2009 at 4:26 pm

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