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Photo Critique 15: ‘Untitled,’ by Diego M.

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I love critiquing photos. It’s the best way to learn and get new ideas for photo shoots. Today, we’re going to critique an image made by Diego, my friend in Miami.

"Untitled," by Diego M. of Miami, Florida

"Untitled," by Diego M. of Miami, Florida

General Overview:
Diego, it’s too bad you don’t take photographs as much as you should. You have a good eye and you’re very creative. I wish you would get interested in photography again because I think you could have a real talent for it. I really enjoy this image because of its relative simplicity. It’s a nice, clean image with a nice use of light and shadow. The subject has an interesting texture with plays of the texture of the background it rests on. I also like the use of color in this image. It has a nice warm tone that helps tie the whole image together.

This is a nice image. Good job.

Improvements
Here are a few improvements I think will make the image better: First, there is a stray straw coming from the top of the hat on the upper right side that is driving me nuts. A little Photoshop and voilà, that’s gone.

In this edit, I used a warm filter over the entire image then added a soft filter to give it a dream-like appearance. (Photo Credit: Diego M. with edit by Jeremy W. Schneider)

In this edit, I used a warm filter over the entire image then added a soft filter to give it a dream-like appearance. (Photo Credit: Diego M. with edit by Jeremy W. Schneider)

Secondly, I think you need to give the subject a little more context. Where is it? Why is it there? Who does the hat belong to? What happened? If you can answer one or more of these questions, then you have the opportunity to make an image the audience can better connect to.

Finally, I think you should edit the photo so the colors standout a little more.

Digi, keep up the good work. Get your camera and go shoot some more.

Thanks for the submission. Good luck and keep shooting!

If you would like to submit a photo for critique, e-mail us at submissions@brickhousephotoschool.com.

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Written by jeremyparce

April 24, 2009 at 7:35 am

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